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Wesly
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Tried-ish

Post by Wesly » Thu Jan 19, 2017 2:43 pm

So I tried to make a pixel animation ( NOT EO RELATED ) but its for a horror rpg game that i'm gonna make.
Any tips on how to make this better ?

ITS 48x48 btw so its so "smol"

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EDIT:
Here's an updated version of it:
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Re: Tried-ish

Post by Amanadiel » Mon Jan 23, 2017 3:42 pm

Fix that head smooshing on the top of the 5fps one.
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Re: Tried-ish

Post by Nurd » Tue Jan 24, 2017 12:01 pm

Your first attempt was fine, you just need to give it an outline and apply some flats to the legs to give the character the illusion of feet. I would also try adding some brighter colors in certain areas as a highlight on the character's body. Also, shorten the arms when they're extended. Makes the character look like some kind of Stretch-Armstrong.
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Re: Tried-ish

Post by Reemus » Wed Jan 25, 2017 2:03 am

It's not horrible, but it does need a bit more detail and it looks like your frames may not be completely aligned with each other. Are you using a grid?

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Re: Tried-ish

Post by Kingofdemonz » Wed Jan 25, 2017 3:09 pm

I agree with Amanadiel that head smooshing looks weird. Also, the updated one looks good but looks sluggish since its so slow, crank up the fps or try adding ''in-betweens'' to the animation to make it look smoother. Nevertheless, you did well for a beginner pixel animator.. 10/10 for effort and producing a good result.
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